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The Silent Chloey Re Done Intimate Persona: Silent Remorse
If I were just a shadow, a shade, a nightmare,
Could you forgive me,
IF I SAID SORRY,
Can't you see that I am the silence in the night, but you won't hear me,
IF I SAID SORRY,
I am all I am, I cannot give much more-ore-ore,
I'm the one that they call for
I'm the one that they want,
IF I SAID SORRY,
Can't you see that I'm expendable,
I can be replaced,
I don't want to give up, but it's hard,
IF I SAID SORRY,
You don't want to know me and that's ok
IF I SAID SORRY,
IF I SAID SORRY,
Yeah, yeah, yeah,
For the darkness I must fight,
From the mountains to the valleys,
I must keep going,
IF I SAID SORRY,
I lost you because of me,
Like a coward I ran
IF I SAID SORRY,
I am all I am, I cannot give much more-ore-ore,
I'm the one that they call for
I'm the one that they want,
IF I SAID SORRY,
Can't you see that I'm expendable,
I can be replaced,
I don't want to give up, but it's hard,
IF I SAID SORRY,
You don't want to know me and that's ok
IF I SAID SORRY,
IF I SAID SORRY,
Yeah, yeah, yeah,
IF I SAID SORRY,
IF I SAID SORRY....
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Just as it says The Silent Chloey's newly rewritten intimate persona, Silent Remorse. It will be up to you to figure out what that does and doesn't mean. Clues and hints are long gone and the first person to note about this might just get a free commission!
The original version...not as good as this one, but still valid
TSC Intimate Persona Song Silence in the DarkI try not to cry,
my voice is lost to you anyway,
but why I am here I don't know
all I know is the pain
My cries they'll never hear,
my words lost in the darkness.
Oh please my dear friend,
teach me how to talk again.
Lead me out of that darkness
All my life I hide my name
you don't hear,
because my voice is no more
My cries they'll never hear,
my words lost in the darkness.
Oh please my dear friend,
teach me how to talk again.
Lead me out of that darkness
So lost am I,
that not place is home.
I used to sing I used to dance,
but I can't anymore
My cries they'll never hear,
my words lost in the darkness.
Oh please my d
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I... found it depressing. Is that Chloey's sad part of life? What did she lost, a friend? Ah...Kate, her best friend (who happens to be her mother)? I hope Chris feel that gap of sorrow
....he must made sure to bear you twins now!!
I want to see what happened in this sad event of Chloey's life! Now this gives me an insight of how Chloey must look up in her artwork....a woman with sadness inside.
Oh, If the Miata description is furnished, I requested you to make a description of your character for the Side story we are making. I'll send Miata's decription later for you to proof read.
....he must made sure to bear you twins now!!I want to see what happened in this sad event of Chloey's life! Now this gives me an insight of how Chloey must look up in her artwork....a woman with sadness inside.
Oh, If the Miata description is furnished, I requested you to make a description of your character for the Side story we are making. I'll send Miata's decription later for you to proof read.